hey dude
i know you gave effort to this and stuff but come on man this was . . . .well bad dude please dude im not trying to be mean but please work more on your vocals and dude this whole thing of trying to sound "hardcore" whats the point of any one else even listening to this song when the original is so much better i'm sorry but this gets 3/10 for effort an 0/5 so that hopefully no one else will be discomforted with stumbling across this